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WWW: Very good understanding of the question and detailed well planned answers, using examples effectivly
EBI: Try to start with a more impressive introduction : Rewrite referencing a theorist/commentator, including examples and more keywords.
Learner Response :
New and Digital media has transformed the media landscape hugely in comparison to Gutenburgs printing press revolution. The internet is seen to be "The most important medium in the 20th century" Briggs and Burke (2005) due to it allowing plurality, diminishing gatekeepers and a new advanced form of communication. However this new and advanced technologys impact on society and bringing about positive impact may be questioned to due its "Killing [of] our culture" Andrew Keen and its flaws such as privacy and accuracy.
WWW: Very good understanding of the question and detailed well planned answers, using examples effectivly
EBI: Try to start with a more impressive introduction : Rewrite referencing a theorist/commentator, including examples and more keywords.
Learner Response :
New and Digital media has transformed the media landscape hugely in comparison to Gutenburgs printing press revolution. The internet is seen to be "The most important medium in the 20th century" Briggs and Burke (2005) due to it allowing plurality, diminishing gatekeepers and a new advanced form of communication. However this new and advanced technologys impact on society and bringing about positive impact may be questioned to due its "Killing [of] our culture" Andrew Keen and its flaws such as privacy and accuracy.
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